I have finally got round to completing the Tribute Page Project! This is my first webpage build. Would love some feedback to see what people think and to understand where I need to improve. Thanks for your time
I am new as well so just two things I am sure of from me.
1.Wall made of < br> seems wrong. The same effect will be achieved with margin, for example:
#applelogo{
margin-bottom:500px;}
The same applies to all multiple < br>. This way is much cleaner and you separate html from design(css).
p{width:1000px} makes it hard to watch on smaller screens. Check it out by making screen small. I would change it to width:90% or max-width:1000px, not sure which is better.
One of the things about creating a responsive webpage is that the page is as easily viewed on a small screen as it is on a larger screen. Youâve made parts of your page responsive but not others. To see what I mean, resize your browser while viewing your tribute page and then load the sample tribute page and resize it.
Did you go back and reread the lessons on âResponsive Web Design Principlesâ? When you were working through did you just put in the correct answer? Or did you try something different to see what the effect was? Thatâs a good way to see changes as you work through the lessons. Give the correct answer to move on but try something different and look at the web page to see what the effect is. Resize if you need to.
Did you look at the sample tribute page to see how that was working? Resizing your browser, looking at, and understanding the HTML and CSS markup.
One thing I will mention is that you cannot make up your own HTML elements. I noticed in one part of your code you had a <p1> element. Thereâs no such thing. While that will not fix your issue, it something you should be aware of and something you should correct.
A hint to get rid of some of the plethora of <br> elements. In your section about young Steve you have one huge paragraph (<p>) with two <br> elements. Instead, when you finished the first paragraph, end it (</p>) then start the next paragraph <p> and when finished, end it </p>. Youâll get the break by doing that.
I understand my answer may be frustrating but each one of these projects builds on the previous one. So what you learn on this one youâll use in the next and that will add some additional lessons. Youâll have to understand each part to keep growing.
It looks better. I see now what you were doing when you had all those break (<br>)
elements. It was to keep the individual paragraphs in one section.
Iâll call out just the young Steve one again. So you styled the paragragh element and now you have three paragraphs but theyâre also broken up into three sections. Instead, why donât you try something like;
<div id=âsection-infoâ>
<p> Some textâŚ</p>
<p> Some more textâŚ</p>
<p> Some additional textâŚ</p>
</div>
Then you can style the section instead of the individual paragraphs and it will all be together in the big white box instead of three separate ones.
Give it a try and see if you like it better and if thatâs what you had in mind.
Youâre not using the correct quotes around âsection-infoâ
Compare the quotes you have around your alt text for Young Steve versus the quotes you have around section-info. Fix the quotes and youâll see what you expect to see.
I think it was the copy paste job, just couldnât notice that error earlier. Think Iâm all done with the page now! Thanks for all the help Now onto the next challengeâŚ
Get rid of the white background boxes behind all of your text and making the text white. I think that would make it more fluid and not so blocky looking.
Also, under âFinal Yearsâ, your image is not showing, and you see a broken link.
With your video at the bottom, I would change the size so that it is a square the same size as your pictures, instead of a small rectangle.
My suggestion is because Iâm sort of a grammar Nazi. In your last paragraph on the page, I would change it from âthem last momentsâ to âhis last moments.â Otherwise, I think it looks really nice.