Tribute Page - Jack O'Neill

Tribute Page - Jack O'Neill
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If you are a Stargate fan, you will know what this page is about.
I would just like to know if there are any improvements I can make. (Besides changing lorem ipsum text) Thanks!

https://codepen.io/Etra/full/wvvypJv

Maybe you should choose another color for the background instead of red? It’s too bright with the font color.
Nice work.

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Yea looking at it now I see what you mean. Thanks.

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Made some more changes to the project.

Hi @Etra, it’s a good looking page. Normally I just do a code review and don’t comment too much on someone’s design because, well, it’s their design. But there are a couple of things to possibly think about;

  • In the tribute section (accomplishments) the white on that coral background is tiring on the eyes.
  • In the tribute section you’ve given a hover effect. Fine for desktops but what about medium or small screens that have no mouse, thus no hover. All they have is a small font.
  • Review the lesson about giving meaningful text to links
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Yes code review is more important advice so thank you for that.